Thursday, December 23, 2010

The Cowboy- By M

Please note this is the final draft, handwritten after many frustrated and abandoned attempts..

p. 1 Onse a pod a time there was a boy who had no pet.
p. 2 One day his mom gave a cat to the boy.
p. 3 He liked it so so much.
p. 4 He huged his mom.
p. 5 He named his cat Ruby.
p. 6 Ruby had a nose and a mouth but... (I am not kidding, she used these dots for suspense)
p. 7 No eyes. The boy was sprised
p. 8 so so much. He ren away skremeing I hate you.
p. 9 MOM! (just caps, one word on page- nice twist because you probably thought, like I did that he was insulting poor Ruby).
p. 10 And go away.
p. 11 One day.
p. 12 He turned into
p. 13 a Cow
p. 14 Boy (I think handwriting was just getting hard, I am not sure if there is a deeper meaning to one word per page).
p. 15 Wen his mom fond
p. 16 out he was a cowboy
p. 17 she skrem
p. 18 D
p. 19 There is a chart of reading levels that M made emulating her books and she designated her story a Level 4

4 comments:

  1. I guess you should edit the title !!! a slip ?

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  2. you can now cancel my previous comment !! lol
    and this one

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  3. this is fantastic/hilarious
    emi and i can't stop laughing

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